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Reviews For David & Star: Why David gave Michael the Bottle
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Reviewer: Reanna Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:46 pm Title: Why

I loved it! That was awesome!
It explained a lot!

Reviewer: Star of David Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2008 1:38 pm Title: Why

I loved it. I didn't understand either but the way you weaved it it sounded right on the money. Hope it does turn into a longer story.

Reviewer: Ghostteller Signed starstarstarstarhalf star [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2008 10:23 am Title: Why

I love it!

The way you go in-depth really hits it!

Reviewer: Logan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2007 4:03 pm Title: Why

that was great will there be more?

Reviewer: Kellcool Signed starstarstarhalf star [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2005 4:09 pm Title: Why

i really like this and davids inner reflection of his tormenting star

Reviewer: Carla Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2005 10:36 pm Title: Why

This is an interesting character introspective. I like seeing David's thoughts on why he torments Star, and I thought it was a nice addition that he won't physically hurt her, but mentally, she's fair game. There were a few typos that jerked me out of the story, but that is easily repaired. This was an interesting idea; thank you for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: Viper Signed starstarstarhalf star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2005 7:08 pm Title: Why

This is good- great use of the film, some interesting concepts, and easy to read. But there are a few problems. A few mistakes that would be easily corrected spoil the flow of the story. I don't think you need a beta reader, but another run through might pick up on those little errors. The other thing is- David turned Michael because Max told him to. I like the idea in your story, and I think it could have been partly true, but I'm fairly certain that the implication in the film is that Max wanted Michael and Sam, and David was his way of getting them. No? Yes? Maybe? Never use & instead of and. Apart from that, this is good stuff, and I'd love to see more from you. If you've got any questions, feel free to ask. Good luck, bub.

Reviewer: Fiver Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf star [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2004 4:09 am Title: Why

I must say, you really nailed that one on the head! Wonderful concept of David and Star. The scheming devil in disguise. Great use of the actual text and connecting your ideas to the movie.

Reviewer: Lucy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2004 7:06 pm Title: Why

I love all the stories between david and star-all the authors make them so real! A great story!!

Reviewer: Cheri Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2004 8:59 pm Title: Why

I love anything with David and Star in it. And this story is so good I hope to see it continue

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