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Reviewer: kitten123 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:15 pm Title: TLC

good story love david

Reviewer: Kirsty Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf star [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 12:39 pm Title: One sick puppy

nice!!!!
would you consider creating something like this for paul/dwayne cause they're my fave pair lol XD

Reviewer: Dark_Surviour Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2009 1:44 am Title: TLC

nice

Reviewer: Marko_Obsessor Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2006 8:45 pm Title: One sick puppy

I love this story! it is very wekk written. GO MARKO!

Reviewer: shaydia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2006 2:37 am Title: TLC

david said do you want me to stop no harder harder oh yeah fuck me.

Reviewer: Kellcool Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2005 3:46 pm Title: One sick puppy

Very....interesting. I may not like slash, but that isn't what this review is about. I think that you rushed things a bit. A lot of people tend to do that. While you don't want to go too slow, speed is a poblem. People tend to want to get their thoughts down and make the plot run too fast. But other wise a very good piece of creative writing. :)

Author's Response: Thank you I guess you could say creative is the word for it.....Why did you read the story if you don't like slash.Oh well it doesn't matter,I just hoped you liked it.I'll try not to rush things to much in my next story.Thanks for the advice.

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