Date: 19 Apr 2009 3:36 pm Title: Letting Go
I'm not a David/Star fan. I'm not. I'm not a David fan. And yet I love them in this story, and I want to be a David/Star fan. I love how you make the reader feel for them no matter what. I love the hint at WW3 (of course). Nicely done.
Date: 01 Mar 2006 9:10 pm Title: Letting Go
wow i cant say its the best but it is beautiful.this story makes me fill s bad for david.it gives you the sence of his regret of not only letting her go but never haveing a family.