Date: 30 Mar 2007 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Killing a psychic (I wonder if she saw it coming.)"
I love it! I've said it before but I'll say it again. I envy people that can intentionally write comedy because I suck so badly at it. Your's is a subtle comedy, kind of sarcastic and I love your protagonist and the whole set up. I think I'm more interested in this whole Police division than the TLB story behind it! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: What you thought this was intentional comedy.... Thanks Sweetie- :)
Date: 19 Aug 2006 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 19 Aug 2006 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I cannot wait to get my hands on the next chapter and see what happens next.