Date: 31 Jul 2011 12:48 am Title: Chapter 22-Revenge Gone Wrong
I couldnt help but laugh. David was perfect
Date: 31 Jul 2011 12:32 am Title: Chapter 21- The Last Mark
Woah. Evil David. But i agree: david is jealous.
Date: 31 Jul 2011 12:14 am Title: Chapter 19- Welcome to Your Family
i knew paul would have made a great dad. Family is important:)
Date: 30 Jul 2011 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 15-Dark is the Dawn
Wow. What can i say? I actually almost cried reading this. The love David as for each of them, for his sons, is beautiful
Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:56 am Title: Chapter 14- The Thin Red Line
i do not like shelby. Nope. Wonderful chapter. Poor David:(... I love Dwayne's job. Just gotta find the # and call asap.
Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:46 am Title: Chapter 13- Party of Five
Dwayne shouldve let her slap him,he did deserve it...Star Wars lol. I could imagine Paul raising his hand and saying 'you will give me all your weed'. Marko a bartender? Lol,love this. Excellent
Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:24 am Title: Chapter 10- Who's Your Daddy?
Okay,i loved this chapter. My favorite so far. Paul's poetic rap was awesome and wow,he is defending his Paulette already. He probably qould have been a great dad.
Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:15 am Title: Chapter 9- Up at the Emerson's
Absolutely loved the 'thats assuming that ryan is even michaels'. Go grandpa
Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:08 am Title: Chapter 8- Something Old, Something New
Oh my gosh! I love your Maria! Love her,love her,love her lol. You did an excellent with this chapter and im loving the story:)
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:42 am Title: Chapter 4- Filtered Fragments
Loved the last few sentences.
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:37 am Title: Chapter 3- Blood Secrets
Woah,I half expected her to be Dwayne's daughter. Paul might have been 'we only come here to watch one thing' but it was dwayne who just smiled. Lol. Great chapter
Date: 08 Jul 2008 1:14 pm Title: Chapter 32- Epilogue- A Jack of All Trades
That was awesome.
This got me though workk.
You've got talent lovee.
Good job you rockk.
Author's Response: Thank you very kindly for your review, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
Date: 21 Nov 2007 10:21 am Title: Chapter 32- Epilogue- A Jack of All Trades
aww its over! ::sob:: Your ideas are so fun, the vampire piss? and David collecting animals. I can just see him doing that. Once I again I enjoyed the attention to detail in all of the stories. It helps keep the movie picture in your brain, as reading is like seeing a little movie.