Date: 22 Apr 2009 12:14 pm Title: Off to Santa Carla
That was halariouse on the last part with Micheal and I love how word things! Good job and keep on going! I'm dieing to hear more. =]
Date: 06 Apr 2009 5:25 am Title: What did he call me?!?!?!?!
Oops,sorry. I guess I've been thinking the wrong thing for awhile.Thanks and I can't wait to hear more. ;)
Author's Response: No problemo'! Just look at the details I write in the story to figure the stuff out.LOL Either way, I'm as happy as a newborn puppy that you like my story. Means I'm finally doing something right around here!LOL!
Date: 05 Apr 2009 3:37 pm Title: What did he call me?!?!?!?!
I loved that! It was hilarious! xD I can't wait tell he finds out it's his daughter's butt he grabbed,hehe
Author's Response: Um, are you talking about Dwayne? And Paul was the one who grabbed her butt, not Dwayne. As I said in my/Ciaras description, she's Native American. But, it is funny when she punched him in the face like that.
Date: 04 Apr 2009 1:21 pm Title: What did he call me?!?!?!?!
I love it! Are you continuing or is that it?
Author's Response: Oh no, I'm definitly going all the way through with it. From beginning to end, making what I believe would be fun and shocking for readers that read this. Though, I think I had to much fun with Ciara and Paul fighting.
Date: 20 Mar 2009 4:41 pm Title: Meeting of...BREAST?!?!
great job i liked it
Author's Response: Thank-you for being the first to review! And is Ciara believable enough? I had a friend describe the basics of my personality and was thinking ' Do I want this Ciara to be wild, crazy and rebelious and go down the same met the boys and in a fit of either stupidity or rebeliousness and get on the bikes, or be smart and want to have a stable life with Micheal?' I chose latter though, but I still wanted something to give her a reason to be that way. So I used my moms middle name and transfered my personality onto her. Sorta like a mothers Day present, wherever she is and might be reading this.