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Reviewer: BlackCat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 3:54 am Title: Blood Calls, and the Hunt

W-O-W.

I adored this very much. Short, simple, but it really stood out to me. I loved the small lines you slipped into the sentences.

This is my favourite one.

skims down his arm
slides across his wrist
twines around his palm
drips from his fingertips

I don't why, I just loved it :-)

For something so short and simple... It really was Dwayne.

Kudos with this. x

Author's Response: Thank you so much! For all that Dwayne is very silent, I love writing him. It's a real trick to use language for a character who rarely speaks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2009 3:48 am Title: Blood Calls, and the Hunt

Wow!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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