Date: 15 Dec 2010 3:54 am Title: Blood Calls, and the Hunt
I adored this very much. Short, simple, but it really stood out to me. I loved the small lines you slipped into the sentences.
This is my favourite one.
skims down his arm
slides across his wrist
twines around his palm
drips from his fingertips
I don't why, I just loved it :-)
For something so short and simple... It really was Dwayne.
Kudos with this. x
Author's Response: Thank you so much! For all that Dwayne is very silent, I love writing him. It's a real trick to use language for a character who rarely speaks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 02 Aug 2009 3:48 am Title: Blood Calls, and the Hunt
Author's Response: Thank you!