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Reviewer: selinofell197 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 9:03 pm Title: The Beginning...

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Reviewer: selinofell197 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 10:16 am Title: The Beginning...

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Reviewer: Woodlenks788 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2020 9:09 am Title: The Beginning...

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Reviewer: FlowerChild Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 5:34 am Title: To The Floor We Shall Go!

Wow More Please

Reviewer: Lostone Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf star [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:03 pm Title: To The Floor We Shall Go!

I love it! plz need more!?

Reviewer: Weirdly insane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:47 pm Title: The Beginning...

Many tips are going to be given here. (This is for all the chapters you have done so far)

Number 1 - Study the characters, they're completely OOC.

Number 2 - Check over your work, there are many errors, as in spelling mistakes

Number 3 - puncuation. Can't do it, find a beta on this site, they will be more than happy to go through your work, as long as you credit their name at the top of your chapter(s)

Number 4 - Go through your work with a fine tooth comb

Number 5 - Mary-Sue. They are the disease of ff, and other writing sites. Your creating one here. Nobody wants to read about a girl with some power and who has nobody who loves her. Make her have flaws, make her realistic. Nobody is perfect

*rolls eyes* You are human, duh, you should know that. I doubt your life is sweet and brill....

I'm not being mean here, so please don't think that. It''s a shame because if you take your time and add in everything, go over this, this would be a good piece of work.

It's not nice to see good talent go to waste. If you love writing then your prepared to take my advise and do what I'm saying.

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