Date: 14 Jan 2011 6:23 pm Title: Fallen Neverland
i really enjoyed this. i hope you write more...
Author's Response: Thank you! I think there will be more to this story.
Date: 08 Jan 2011 3:30 am Title: Fallen Neverland
Yay! Carla is writing again!
I think I read this on your livejournal, and I'm so pleased to see it here.
I love how sensory, and almost dreamlike, this piece is. Your writing is concise, yet personal and engrossing, and has a unique style and prespective I've never seen before. You write Star here as a human being, with different moods and feelings which gives her depth and relatablity. (sp?)
The world you've created here...this place of "dim shadows" really captures the feel of the film, and every character is brought to life with subtly crafted, thoughtful writing. I loved Dwayne and David's brief cameos at the end. Haunting and immersive stuff. Lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is absolutely excellent feedback.rnrnI really enjoy writing Star, and I'm so glad I make her easier to relate to and with more depth than she had in the movie. I think her character has such potential, but is really underused in the movie.