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Star of David [Contact] | Member
Real name: Nikki
Member Since: 23 Dec 2007
Bio: My name is Nikki. I wrote the Sam's Love series. Just want to get back into writing again. Hope everyone likes the new stories I come up with.
Gender: female
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Reviews by Star of David
More introspection than action. Focused on the relationship btetween David & Star; hardly Michael at all except as a way to understand David & Star. Basically talks about how things have been between David & Star and how he wants her to become a full vampire.

Note: One thing that had always confused me slightly was why David didn't just kill Michael & why he gave him the blood. This story is my understanding of why.
[David] David, Michael Emerson, Star
Genres: Drama, General
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: None
Series: None
PG • Completed: Yes • 1 chapter(s) • Published: 29 Nov 2004 • Updated: 29 Nov 2004 • Word Count: 1254 • Read Count: 1720 • Reviews: 51 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Why

I loved it. I didn't understand either but the way you weaved it it sounded right on the money. Hope it does turn into a longer story.

This story is set when the lost boys were still in high school and off course in this one I am afraid they are mortal. David feels a strong love for Star but alas she is with Michael what can he do.
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Marko, Michael Emerson, Paul, Star
Genres: General
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: None
Series: None
G • Completed: No • 3 chapter(s) • Published: 10 Jul 2005 • Updated: 24 Jul 2005 • Word Count: 3319 • Read Count: 3835 • Reviews: 23 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2008 Title: Chapter 3: chapter 3

oh plz write a ch.4

Well people Thorn is the leader of the lost girls and is one of the most hateful females you will ever meet. But was she always that way???
[Series Branch-Offs/Original Fiction] None
Genres: General
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: None
Series: None
G • Completed: No • 2 chapter(s) • Published: 28 Aug 2005 • Updated: 28 Aug 2005 • Word Count: 2063 • Read Count: 2802 • Reviews: 14 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Simon

I liked this. Please write more.

David gets his revenge before the end.
[Lost Boys, David] David, Michael Emerson
Genres: Angst, Horror
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: Character Death, Heavy Violence, Other potentially disturbing content
Series: None
R • Completed: Yes • 1 chapter(s) • Published: 03 Mar 2008 • Updated: 03 Mar 2008 • Word Count: 1986 • Read Count: 1196 • Reviews: 33 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Cold Comfort

I loved the story. It broke my heart that David killed Laddie and then himself but all in all I loved it. Hope you write more soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, I nearly cried writing that bit. Never fear, I have a couple more fics up my sleeve ;-)

I do not own The Lost Boys Warner Brother's does lucky them. I am not making a profit off this, and I don't intend to. I'm not that kind of person. Just writing because I enjoy it.
[David, Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Marko, OCs: Multiple, Paul
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Pairing(s): David/Original Character, Dwayne/Original Character, Marko/Original Character, Paul/Original Character
Warnings: Adult Themes, Blood play, Drug Use, Femme Slash (female/female pairings), Heavy Violence
Series: None
NC-17 • Completed: No • 22 chapter(s) • Published: 14 Mar 2008 • Updated: 31 Mar 2009 • Word Count: 19187 • Read Count: 19623 • Reviews: 39 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not a review. Just wanted to let everyone know. I did go back over the last chapter and fixed alot of the typo's that were pouinted out to me. Hope it's a somewhat better read now.

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sorry about that.lol My comp decided it wanted to post my response three times.

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

it was mentioned again in chapter 6 not chapter two.

Fortunetelling by Carla [PG-13]
Star will tell her future, and she will read Star's mind.
[Lost Boys, Star, Crossover] Star
Genres: Crossover, Romance, Supernatural
Pairing(s): Other
Warnings: Femme Slash (female/female pairings)
Series: None
PG-13 • Completed: Yes • 1 chapter(s) • Published: 27 Apr 2008 • Updated: 27 Apr 2008 • Word Count: 474 • Read Count: 1978 • Reviews: 41 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Fortunetelling

I liked it. This was great.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Mirrors by Pyro [PG] starstarstarstarstar
When faced with an opportunity to visit the real Santa Carla shortly before the start of the movie, Victoria takes it, knowing it will give her an opportunity to see Dwayne in real life. But when Max decides he wants her to be his bride, Victoria must wait until the events of the movie have been concluded before she can leave. Can she and her son make it home alive?
[Lost Boys, Original Character] Alan Frog, David, Dwayne, Edgar Frog, Grandpa, Laddie, Lucy Emerson, Marko, Max, Michael Emerson, OCs: Multiple, Paul, Sam Emerson, Star
Genres: Action/Adventure, Lost Cave Story - Real People Feature
Pairing(s): Withheld
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Non-Self Sert Challenge
Challenges: The Non-Self Sert Challenge
Series: None
PG • Completed: Yes • 15 chapter(s) • Published: 27 May 2008 • Updated: 18 Jan 2009 • Word Count: 25910 • Read Count: 24084 • Reviews: 46 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2008 Title: Chapter 1: First Meetings

This is really good. Of course maybe it's not so great for her now that David is coming after her.lol

What if Michael had chosen a different path? Will contain slash and dark themes
[David, Michael Emerson] Alan Frog, David, Dwayne, Edgar Frog, Laddie, Marko, Max, Michael Emerson, OC: Male, Paul, Star
Genres: Supernatural
Pairing(s): David/Michael
Warnings: Adult Themes, Blood play, Character Death, Mild Violence, Slash (male/male parings), Smut (graphic sex scenes)
Series: None
NC-17 • Completed: No • 5 chapter(s) • Published: 23 Aug 2008 • Updated: 16 Feb 2009 • Word Count: 6186 • Read Count: 6876 • Reviews: 44 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

I like this so far. Can't wait to read more of it. I love how you describe David. It's perfect.

Dwayne meets a girl and what was fantasy turns to reality.
[Dwayne] Dwayne, OC: Female
Genres: PWP (porn without plot)
Pairing(s): Dwayne/Original Character
Warnings: Adult Themes, Blood play, Smut (graphic sex scenes)
Series: None
NC-17 • Completed: Yes • 1 chapter(s) • Published: 22 Mar 2009 • Updated: 22 Mar 2009 • Word Count: 739 • Read Count: 2208 • Reviews: 72 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just want to thank whoever gave me the stars.

Reviewer: Star of David Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you Aly and Python. I am glad that you both liked it. I am currently writing a new one. It will go more indepth with a normal female character. So This next one may not be a one shot, but a longer story.