The Lost Cave :: A Lost Boys Fansite

The site houses fanfic, fanvids, discussion boards, and fellow fans of The Lost Boys
RSS
Witty Nickname [Contact] | Member
Real name:
Member Since: 16 Jul 2006
Bio:
~ Think of a cool and witty nickname, pretend I'm using it. ~
The Wittyverse - A fandom black hole with labyrinthine tendencies. Yeah, it's possible. (My LJ - a central spot for all my fandom & digi fun.)


Hmm, let's see, I'm better than you at checkers, poker, and air hockey. I also play a mean game of solitaire.... seriously, I pwn myself all the time at that game.

I'm 22 years old and refuse to act like it.

I was born and raised in a podunk town somewhere in the midwest; our state bird is the Kinky Purple Goldfish, and our native tree is the Purple Palm.

What else you ask? Well I'm obsessed with vampires, faeries and most other fantasy things. Mainly vampires though. I have red hair, green eyes, and stand at a proud 5'6".

I'm also very witty when the mood strikes me. Honestly, I can crack you up.

No, really. For srs.


Beta-reader: No
Gender: female
[Report This]
Reviews by Witty Nickname
Sarcastic journal entries for the vampires in the film. Do not expect this to be intelligent or angsty. This are superficial parodies. Fun and no brains. Inspired by Cassandra Claire’s Very Secret Diaries (LotR).
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Laddie, Marko, Max, Michael Emerson, Paul, Star
Genres: Comedy/Parody, Humour
Pairing(s): David/Star, Michael/Star
Warnings: None
Series: None
PG • Completed: Yes • 7 chapter(s) • Published: 27 Nov 2004 • Updated: 10 Nov 2006 • Word Count: 3575 • Read Count: 26815 • Reviews: 187 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Star

Words cannot describe how much I enjoyed this story! I first seen this over at ff.net but I don't think I ever reviewed, I meant to but never got around to it. Anyway, this is one of my favs in the whole LB fanfiction world, congrats on pulling this off so well. I never thought anything would top the LoTR one, but this definitely did... at least in my opinion. Hope to see more from ya soon :o)

[Sequel to Manipulating Fate] Ruby adjusts into her life as a vampire, but will her heart choose Marko or David?
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Marko, OC: Female, Paul
Genres: Drama, Horror, Romance, Supernatural
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: Heavy Violence, Other potentially disturbing content
Series: The Carousel Series
R • Completed: Yes • 20 chapter(s) • Published: 29 Oct 2005 • Updated: 18 May 2007 • Word Count: 19896 • Read Count: 14260 • Reviews: 101 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2007 Title: Chapter 18: 18

Evil! Evil! Evil!
This long for an update, and you stop there?! Gah!

lol you're trying to torture us aren't you?

*sigh* Oh well, I'll deal. One chapter is better then none, and , as always, you wrote it superbly. Good job :o)

Harry is on vacation in California when he is accidentally sent back in time to 1986. What's an 18 year old wizard to do when he meets up with a pack of bloodthirsty vampires? Possible slash. Harry Potter and Lost Boys AU.
[Lost Boys, Crossover] David, Dwayne, Laddie, Marko, Other Fandom Character - Crossover, Paul
Genres: Action/Adventure, Crossover, Supernatural
Pairing(s): Other
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Drug Use, Mild Violence, Other potentially disturbing content, Slash (male/male parings)
Series: None
R • Completed: No • 12 chapter(s) • Published: 07 Aug 2006 • Updated: 06 Aug 2009 • Word Count: 34344 • Read Count: 16993 • Reviews: 54 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice chapter, I'm really enjoying this HP crossover. The whole idea is just so... so... I dunno what the proper word is. Right, maybe?

Yeah, I'll go with that. Can't wait for your next update :o)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I love HP crossovers (lol, just look at all of the stories I'm currently writing), there are just so many possibilities with that fandom, what with it having wizards with magic at their disposal that can do pretty much what ever the wizard wants.... I'm hoping I can get the next chapter done by next month, but I'm not a very fast writer and my chapters for this story are long (about 3000 words per chapter) so it'll prolly wind up being more like three months before I'm even close to getting it posted *Sigh* I'm glad you like it so far!

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

".....watching as they all wrestled for a joint that had been carried off by a pigeon minutes ago."

*grins in amusement*

Finally! Took ya long enough to update this.... ya better not take as long with the next. If ya do I'll have no choice but to sick David on you. I'll just tell him it was you who signed him up for all those gay alliance newsletters.

Oh, good job btw! *grin*



Author's Response: *grins impishly* I make no promises. But it should be done soon-ish than that last one. Now that me and Paul have an agreement, things should go slightly smooth-ish. And thank you!

(Formerly Are You Goint To Kill Me?)
Evelyn meets David on a pier in San Francisco. She likes David but is perplexed by some of his strange behavior. After a date she can't remember, David and the Lost Boys return to Santa Carla and she follows. Insight into David's past. No Micheal or Star. PLEASE REVIEW!!! If no one reviews I think no one is reading! If no one is reading I don't feel motivated to take the time to publsih new chapters!
[Lost Boys, David] David, Dwayne, Marko, Paul
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: Mild Violence
Series: The Adventure Series
R • Completed: Yes • 25 chapter(s) • Published: 10 Aug 2006 • Updated: 12 Feb 2007 • Word Count: 41948 • Read Count: 14742 • Reviews: 19 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Lectures From Max

See? I told you I'd get around to it *proud smile*

This is a great story, I'm really enjoying it! I still have more chapters to read (I'm such a slow reader, the comp screen hurts my eyes after a while so I have to take breaks in between reading) but so far it's great :o)

Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2007 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Favorite

Yay! I finally finished reading it! Told ya I would lol

Good job Vi, can't wait for the sequel. . .but I already told ya this at ff.net *chuckle*

Is Cathy going to have her own story, or be part of the sequel to this one? Lol I think I read it wrong at ff.net, so just ignore that part of my review.

Although I still think it'd make a good stand alone, the idea sounds that great to me. But that's just my opinion.

Okay, I'll stop blabbing now lol. Anyhoo, once again, good job!

Just another night of Hair pulling. HUMOR FIC!
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Marko, Paul
Genres: Comedy/Parody, General, Humour
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: Drug Use, Mild Violence
Series: None
PG • Completed: Yes • 1 chapter(s) • Published: 30 Dec 2006 • Updated: 30 Dec 2006 • Word Count: 525 • Read Count: 1463 • Reviews: 23 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2007 Title: Chapter 1: I wish I had Short Hair

I already reviewed this at ff.net but wanted to do it here too. I'm weird. Lol :o)

Still a good fic, really funny, I enjoy reading about the guys being silly. Good job!

''Cat' finds something interesting on the way to visit some Friends and decides to step in...' Takes place shortly after the Movie.
[Lost Boys] Alan Frog, David, Dwayne, Edgar Frog, Marko, OC: Female, Paul
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Pairing(s): David/Original Character, Dwayne/Original Character, Marko/Original Character, Paul/Original Character
Warnings: Adult Themes, Blood play, Character Death, Heavy Violence, Mild Violence, Other potentially disturbing content, Smut (graphic sex scenes)
Series: None
R • Completed: No • 3 chapter(s) • Published: 29 Jan 2007 • Updated: 08 Sep 2007 • Word Count: 21560 • Read Count: 3098 • Reviews: 21 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Man, I'm really bad at reviewing, I can never think of much to say besides 'good job!'

...... so, on that note, good job! lol

'Quinn gets an urgent late night call from one of her Childer and the news is dire...' Takes place tward the End of the Movie.
[Lost Boys] Alan Frog, David, Dwayne, Edgar Frog, Laddie, Lucy Emerson, Marko, Max, Michael Emerson, OC: Female, Paul, Star
Genres: Action/Adventure, Crossover, Drama, Horror, Supernatural
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: Blood play, Character Death, Heavy Violence
Series: None
R • Completed: Yes • 1 chapter(s) • Published: 29 Jan 2007 • Updated: 30 Jan 2007 • Word Count: 4400 • Read Count: 898 • Reviews: 41 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, at first I was afraid to read this, I thought I'd be lost because I'm not a fan of White Wolf or any of the other things you listed.

Thankfully you made it all understandable! It... hmm, what's the word? Flowed? Meshed?

Eh, you get what I mean lol

I really enjoyed this, I like the thought of David having a different sire other than Max.

Good job :o)

One thing I gotta point out for ya is that several times you forgot to capitalize at the beginning of sentences, and also forgot to put periods at the end of the sentence. No biggy, we all miss that stuff. Lol you wouldn't believe how times I have to keep going back over my own published story and fix that type of stuff.

Once again, good job!


p.s. Are you gonna add more to this? I hope you do. *hint hint*


Author's Response: *grin* much happyness! I'm glad I mad all he White Wolf stuff I put in understandable! I was a bit worried about that. Hmm, I thought I'd fixed the capitalization/punctuation issues, thanks for pointing that out. :) I'll have to go fix that. And yah, I may work more on this, I've been considering a prequel or seqel for a bit. At the verry least I may post my alternate verson. Mostly alternate ending, really... :/

OFC First-Person POV Ficlets.
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Laddie, Marko, OC: Female, Paul, Star
Genres: Character Reflection, Drama, Fluff, General, PWP (porn without plot), Romance
Pairing(s): David/Original Character, Dwayne/Original Character, Marko/Original Character, Paul/Original Character
Warnings: Adult Themes, Blood play, Drug Use, Mild Violence, Other potentially disturbing content, Smut (graphic sex scenes)
Series: None
R • Completed: No • 4 chapter(s) • Published: 03 Feb 2007 • Updated: 01 Mar 2007 • Word Count: 7842 • Read Count: 4216 • Reviews: 29 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Problem Child.

*proudly puts on a cap that says 'Gutters: A fun place for the mind.'

More Pauly! More Pauly!

Author's Response: *snicker, brandishes her Button that says the same* Yah, there's never too much of all that. I need to write like this more often. *grin*

Paul wins a night of being leader of the Lost Boys. Hilarity at David's expense ensues.
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Marko, Paul
Genres: Comedy/Parody, Fluff, General, Humour
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Paul In Charge
Challenges: Paul In Charge
Series: None
PG • Completed: Yes • 7 chapter(s) • Published: 04 Feb 2007 • Updated: 06 Feb 2007 • Word Count: 3378 • Read Count: 13536 • Reviews: 48 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm speechless here, this is just great! There are so many parts I love, but only one stands out to me the most.

'...and a sash that read “El Presidente” clearly scrawled in crayon.'

Thank you for that line. Seriously, I choked on my soda when I read that lol

It's all fun and games, but beware the glitter.
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Marko, Paul
Genres: Comedy/Parody, Drabble - Under 500 Words, Humour
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: None
Series: None
R • Completed: Yes • 1 chapter(s) • Published: 05 Feb 2007 • Updated: 05 Feb 2007 • Word Count: 457 • Read Count: 1157 • Reviews: 24 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LMAO! Poor Marko! This was just priceless, honestly you just made my day :o)

In 2006 three college kids move into the old ranch house near Santa Cruz. All the locals call it "The Emerson Place" because of the old man who lived there for so long, until he died. It was funny, how he went, apparently he got a heart attack, slammed on the break of his old car, flew out, and was impaled on his own fence post. It's a nice enough house, great for the deal they got. Those two boys aparently had been wanting to sell for a long time. The plumbing's a bit off and there's a funny smell in the fire place but it's alright. They keep finding weird things around, though. The Emerson Boys didn't take everything. They didn't want those horns, aparently. It's a nice place. . . sorta.
[Lost Boys] Alan Frog, David, Dwayne, Edgar Frog, Grandpa, Lucy Emerson, Marko, Max, Michael Emerson, OCs: Multiple, Paul, Sam Emerson, Star, Widow Jonhson
Genres: Drama, Horror, Mystery, Supernatural, Suspense
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: Character Death, Mild Violence
Series: None
PG-13 • Completed: No • 4 chapter(s) • Published: 08 Mar 2007 • Updated: 06 Jun 2007 • Word Count: 3279 • Read Count: 7862 • Reviews: 27 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Introduction

Vi, I love you! LOL! This intro is great, I can't wait to read more! You got me on ghostly kick now. *sighs*

Anyhoo, hurry up with that first chappy!

Sequel to The Adventures of Evelyn, David, and The new Lost Girls (formerly Are You Going To Kill Me?). David has a choice to make about what he is going to do with Evelyn. He has to decide whether to kill her or turn her. A young vampire, Cathy, who works at McDonalds gets involved with the boys. She isn't "cool" like The Lost Boys, but she takes a shine to Paul. Please read and review!
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Marko, Max, OC: Female, Paul
Genres: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Pairing(s): David/Original Character
Warnings: Adult Themes, Mild Violence
Series: The Adventure Series
R • Completed: Yes • 11 chapter(s) • Published: 15 Mar 2007 • Updated: 27 Feb 2010 • Word Count: 29030 • Read Count: 5617 • Reviews: 32 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Gang Leader's Girl

Good work Vi, I can tell a huge difference between your writing in this and the beginning of your first story. Dunno how to describe it, but so far it's less jumpy and has better grammar and whatnot.... it's obvious you've grown in writing skill in my opinion. And you haven't even written much yet! So I'm sure this is a good sign lol

Good start, can't wait for more :o)

Reviewer: Witty Nickname Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Cathy The Uncool Vampire

**squeal** Cathy!

Okay, ahem, *takes a breath to calm herself* I did not just let out a fangirlish squeal over a female OC......*sighs* I just love the idea of her. I guess because it mirrors one of my first original stories from when I younger, of course mine was never this good.... and all you've done is introduce her so far lol

*shakes head and chuckles* Good job Vi! I'm lovin' it! *snickers and wonders if anyone will catch the pun there*